On “Tea Party” | 2023-11-07
The premise of characters in the story being able to hear the narration of their own thoughts tickled me. I decided for three characters as to be able to make the joke that after thinking that it's a limited perspective narrator the characters do hear another person's thoughts, but not the ones of the character that wanted it to happen to them. It was really difficult to find an end to the story though. There needed to be a payoff to either the joke or the mystery. I couldn't come up with a satisfying conclusion to either.